The Core Rule
THE GOLDEN RULE OF WRITING
- Make Everything a Journey
- Start Strong, Finish Strong
- Take the Landscape View
Storytelling
CHARACTERS
- Compile Dossiers for Your Characters 33
- Explore Characters’ Lives, Zone by Zone
- Find Your Characters’ ‘Desire Lines’ 49
- Use the Wheel of Archetypes 54
- Spin the Wheel of Archetypes
NARRATIVE
- Work in the Right Genre
- Give Your Story a Narrative Arc
- Structure Your Story, Moment by Moment
- Give Stories More Than One Arc
- Show Characters Hitting Brick Walls
- Nest Journeys Inside Journeys
THE WORLD OF THE STORY
- Create Small, Knowable Places
- Map the Character’s ‘Circles of Life’
- Use Place to Explain Character, Identity, and Ideas
- Place Stories in a Larger World
ACTION AND SCENES
- Depict Specific, Deliberate Actions
- Use Speech Acts to Propel the Story
- Build Actions into Scenes
- Create Mystery—Then Surprise the Reader
RHYTHM AND BEATS
- Use Beats to Move Stories Forward
- Use Beats For Descriptions
- Yo-Yo Scene and Summary
DETAILS
- Find Details By Looking Inside-Out
- Isolate Details to Make Big Points
- Use Status Details to Reveal Ego and Desire
- Put Details into Action
THE SENSES
- Help the Reader to See
- Help the Reader to Hear
- Help the Reader to Feel
WORDPLAY
- Tap Into Life’s Everyday Rhythms
- Use Metaphors and Similes to Orient and Disorient
- Play Improv with Words
- Remember that Good is Great
NUMBERS
- Use Ones to Highlight People, Places, and Issues
- Use Twos for Oppositions and Complements
- Use Threes to Reveal Dynamic Relations
- Use Lists to Show complexity
The Mechanics of Writing
SENTENCES
- Follow the Golden Rule for Sentences
- Give Every Sentence Clear Blasts
- Build Hinge and Roller-Coaster Sentences
- Alternate Short and Long Sentences
WORDS
- Use Simple Words, Almost Always
- Use Longer Words as Precision Instruments
- Use Active Verbs, Even to Describe Passivity
- Use the Verbs To Be and To Have . . . Only Rarely
- Avoid Bureaucratese and Empty-Calorie Words
- Avoid Aggressive Adjectives and Adverbs
PARAGRAPHS
- Make Every Paragraph an ‘Idea Bucket’
- Follow the Golden Rule in Every Paragraph
- ‘Climb the Arc’ in Most Paragraphs
COMPOSITION
- Make Every Piece a Journey
- Find the Right Shape
- Slot Your Paragraphs
- Make Transitions Lightly
Technical Procedures
GRAMMAR
- Make Sure the Parts of Speech Get Along
- Use Punctuation to Direct Traffic
- Select the Right Word, Not Something Close
EDITING
- Search and Destroy, From Big to Small
- Fix Problem Paragraphs With Tabloid Headlines
- Edit by Reading Aloud and Backward
- Murder Your Darlings
Analysis
STORYTELLING FOR ANALYSIS
- Narrate Complex Issues
- Use Beats to Make Arguments
- Use Cliffhangers to Drive Analysis
- Use the Senses in Arguments and Rhetoric
- Allow Ideas To Unfold, One by One
QUESTIONS AND BRAINSTORMING
- To Get Started, Spill Your Mind
- Combine This-or-That and W Questions
- Always Ask: What Causes What?
FRAMING
- Use Testimony of Experts and Others
- Consider Hypotheticals and Scenarios
- Find a Super Model to Guide Analysis
MAKING A CASE
- Climb the ‘Ladder of Abstraction’
- Identify and Operationalize Variables
- Crunch the Numbers
- Play the Game of Halves